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Cinnamon Coffee
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: March 06, 2022 12:04AM

Cinnamon Coffee

Dreaming of being awake -
Three times the touch of taste
Interlaced in what comes next -
Betrayed by ‘I wasn’t there
Last time.’

The circle ends with itself.
I want to get out of the circle
Of reason…experience…false
Continuity.

Yet the peace engulfs
Every turn. Put
The ball on the incline
And run outward.

I am not mechanical,
Meaning:
I don’t make the same mistakes
All the time.

I know the day…
The computer told me
When I asked.


Re: Cinnamon Coffee
Posted by: les712 (68.116.92.---)
Date: March 06, 2022 12:11PM

Another good read Pete, I especially liked these lines:

Three times the touch of taste
Interlaced in what comes next -



Les


Re: Cinnamon Coffee
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: March 06, 2022 03:45PM

Thanks, Les.

Peter




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