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The Truth Of God
Posted by: easyeverett (97.125.144.---)
Date: March 04, 2022 09:56PM

The days of praise for every vessel filled
with weight of ancient knowledge will be stilled
as weight of brand new paradigms within
refuse abuse of man by mythic sin.

Now family helps sin begin its way
inside a child upon arrival day
for they know evil filled all souls with sin
when apple-grapple Eve made Adam grin.

The trouble with a hunger for the fruit:
it is a metaphor in mad pursuit
of truth that blames the weaker will of Man
for weakness in the weaker Master plan


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: March 05, 2022 11:06AM

There are some great lines in here Tom, I enjoyed the read. I believe man creates God in his own image.

">"when apple-grapple Eve made Adam grin


Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/05/2022 11:07AM by les712.


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: March 06, 2022 04:06PM

I've had a moral debate with myself for some time. One that, should I come to a definite conclusion, will determine my future actions dramatically. It is clearly immoral to force change in thought on others, displayed by the various religions and tyrants throughout time. But when those to be converted are willing, despite any real understanding of their situation, how far should they be taken?


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: March 07, 2022 11:51PM

The only conversion I look forward to is from decimals to fractions...and back again.


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.178.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 12:04AM

or fahrenheit to celcius?

easyeverett,

I can't say I understand what is being said with the poem, although it would seem to be dispelling a belief?

Mary

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/08/2021 09:17AM by UPMarty.


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 09:30PM

I know, I know. No one likes to talk to little old me. kicks at the ground


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: March 09, 2022 12:31AM

Mr. P.

The real problem for our race since this invention of religion, at least, has been people deciding important matters for other people. My advice is to leave the willing alone.

love,

Peter


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: March 09, 2022 02:29AM

Quite unfair to blame religion for man's problems.


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: March 09, 2022 03:21PM

Who said life was fair?


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: March 10, 2022 07:08PM

Not I, that's why man invented law and government.


Re: The Truth Of God
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (71.249.169.---)
Date: April 20, 2022 02:33PM

Unfailingly
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (68.194.87.---)
Date: August 17, 2021 06:00AM


If I told you all the secrets of the Morningstar
With a grandness facing skyward and receiving and unwound
Then the tendency would be to have your mouth ajar
In conformity with gazes that have shifted to the ground

For the whitewash and the blackmail are uneven now
As to which way this is leaning all depends on when it’s seen
For we must have been as good or bad as them somehow
And the answer “M” is truly now the one that lies between




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