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Last Thought
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: February 23, 2022 02:54AM

Last Thought

Scraping grime from my timer
I realize – every surface of my life
Has traces of the world passing by.


Re: Last Thought
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.178.---)
Date: February 23, 2022 03:53AM

Hopefully, it's not the "last" thought, but I can relate very well to this, Peter. On a certain level, I'm contented that each day is what it is, but on some other level, it seems that time passes a bit too nonchalantly, nearly wastefully. One year slips very easily into five, which doubles very nicely into ten...and what of it? I liked reading this one, Peter, because there's some consolation in knowing these thoughts are shared by others.

Mary


Re: Last Thought
Posted by: les712 (68.185.70.---)
Date: February 23, 2022 12:27PM

Good one, Peter, layers upon layers.

Les


Re: Last Thought
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: February 24, 2022 12:02AM

Thanks, kids.

Peter


Re: Last Thought
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: February 24, 2022 10:06PM

Well, if you're dying, good luck. That aside, I enjoy the directness, the lack of ambiguity. Function rather than form, I might wager.


Re: Last Thought
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: February 25, 2022 01:33AM

P.,

no such luck. last thought of the day. just being buddha for the day...

amo,

Peter

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Re: Last Thought
Posted by: mg (64.12.116.---)
Date: March 01, 2022 05:22PM

Hi Peter, I like this "last thought"




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