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Lessons
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: February 09, 2022 03:07PM

Lessons

When I played hookie from summer school
To play softball
And broke my thumb at home plate
Tagging out ‘Fish,’
My best friend’s brother,
I was very careful
Not to learn any lessons
From the experience,
Especially the wrong ones.

I still remember that day
Away from Sir Walter Scott,
The Lady of the Lake,
And its endless cadences
Ta-dumming me away from
A winter of failed Parlez-vous’s
And those frighteningly unsteady legs
Beneath my recitation of
‘In Xanadu did Kublai Khan
a stately pleasure-dome decree....’

To this day I bare the scars
Of a successful summer’s high school day –
The inability to memorize
Even a single line of my own device -
An errant Knight toward Northumberland,
Another smile in the tree…
And seek sanctuary from memory
And repetition
And someone else’s box of chocolate truths.

Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 02/09/2021 09:12PM by petersz.


Re: Lessons
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.178.---)
Date: February 09, 2022 08:06PM

Peter, am I dreaming or had you posted this poem some time ago? I like the thoughts this brings forth about lessons, both formal and from experiencing life. I also understand there to be a message within about the lessons others would want to impose upon us that don't necessarily enrich our lives and can even be limiting. I have thoughts about the methodology of formal education, which I think can be particularly limiting with its pass or fail emphasis, but that's a subject for another day. Liked the poem.

S2L4 its

Mary


Re: Lessons
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: February 09, 2022 09:15PM

Thanks, Mary.

At 8am my grammar tends toward the unschooled.

I think I've written at least one previous poem about some of this before, but I haven't posted this one before.

Thanks for listening [reading] carefully,

amo,

Peter


Re: Lessons
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.243.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 09:46AM

Keep up the fight, Peter. It is what enables you to continue tapping into that enormous reservoir of creativity you possess.

Joe

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/10/2021 09:46AM by hpesoj.


Re: Lessons
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 01:09PM

Thanks, Joe. that is also my understanding of the process. Not choosing to survive is not an option.

Peter


Re: Lessons
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.243.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 09:24PM

By the way, Peter, the first verse is one of the best things I've read in quite some time. I love those last four lines in particular.

Joe




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