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making time for myself
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.174.129.---)
Date: February 08, 2022 07:03PM

I took the day off
to spend it with myself
getting reacquainted
with who that is
as I seem to have morphed
in to someone other
than at least the idea
of whom I used to know

you can lose yourself
in your job
in your children
in the hopes of others
and the disappointments
you create by having
the wrong expectations
as you pursue life’s joy

finding each day
that it lies within
and manifests as different things
as the days pile up
and unfold before you
each with unexpected moments
of small victories and losses
that comprise your life

I’d like to become
better friends with myself
though, I rarely make time
to be alone with my thoughts
to be quiet and still
so I can hear the desires
softly whispering in my heart
but today, I'm making time
for myself


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: les712 (68.116.92.---)
Date: February 09, 2022 12:00AM

I like this introspective narrative, Sherry, especially the third stanza. A fine read.

Les


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.174.129.---)
Date: February 09, 2022 11:46AM

thanks


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.243.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 09:50AM

Sherry:

Sage advice in a nicely written piece.

Joe


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.174.129.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 10:01AM

Thank you, Joe. I appreciate the feedback.


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.178.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 07:12PM

and the disappointments
you create by having
the wrong expectations
as you pursue life’s joy


Amen, sister. I agree with everyone's comments. This is really nice, Sherry.

Mary


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.174.129.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 07:22PM

thank you, Mary. I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: February 10, 2022 11:52PM

I notice many people, when asked how to improve the world, rarely mention proper breathing techniques.


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.174.129.---)
Date: February 11, 2022 03:09PM

deep cleansing breath in through your nose.....slow exhale through your mouth....repeat as necessary smiling smiley


Re: making time for myself
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: February 14, 2022 03:16PM

Don't forget proper hydration. Heavy labor, mind numbing paperwork, prettifying your skin to charm the simple minded. To do any in a hardy, robust manner requires more water than most imagine. Bet you didn't know prettifying was a word?




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