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Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: January 22, 2022 12:23AM

Return

White joy: the rising sun,
fearful of its own eclipse,
Sleeps this afternoon.


Re: Return
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: May 19, 2022 09:16AM

Here you go:


Re: Return
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: May 19, 2022 12:34PM

Thanks, Les,

I was doing my breathing exercises by the end of the piece.

Peter




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