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Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 09/11/2021 08:37AM by marflow.
ratamacues, now that's an interesting word. I really love this, marflow. There is much to applaud within this piece with your vivid descriptions and how clearly you are saying something by showing it, not saying it, the contrast, the psychology, the feeling it gives off, and how it flows. It is lovely read aloud. Really nice.
Mary
And in going back to look at the title, wow, I love that too because it only adds yet another layer. Super.
Mary
Mary
Thanks for your kind comments. I try to achieve good artistry with poems, and sometimes it works. It is nice to know when it does.
all the best to you and yours,
Marflow
marflow, I love the contrast between his and hers...good work.
I too second what Mary and Frosty said. This is beautifully "done"!
K.Q.
Frosty
thanks for reading and commenting. I was hoping the contrast would stand out. The brashness of self vs. gentleness towards others.
KQ thanks for your comment.
Marflow