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A Trip North
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: November 22, 2021 03:07AM

A Trip North

I take in my hand
The slow arctic salt
Before a vision
Of a place I have never been to
And taste the strength
Of my lone imagination
Ready for anything.
Anything.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/22/2009 03:07AM by petersz.


Re: A Trip North
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.243.---)
Date: November 22, 2021 01:08PM

I like the positive attitude ringing out here, Peter. "I taste the strength of my own imagination" is an especially memorable line.

Curious, though: why "slow" arctic salt? Seems an odd adjective.

Joe

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/22/2009 01:08PM by hpesoj.


Re: A Trip North
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: November 22, 2021 03:04PM

Watching the glacial ice north of Siberia on the satelite camera got me feeling it moves very slowly, Joe.

Peter


Re: A Trip North
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.243.---)
Date: November 23, 2021 06:51AM

Makes sense. Thanks for the explanation.

J




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