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"ALONE"
Posted by: pwb (216.223.176.---)
Date: November 14, 2021 02:30AM

All around all I see
Is darkness enveloping me
To the right no one is there
To the left was only despair
I lay here wondering why
Everything seems to be flying by
The feeling of emptiness is all around
So I lay with my back to the ground
Curled into a ball
Waiting for this life to fall
Into the emptiness its destined to be
Where no one around cares for me


Re: "ALONE"
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.176.---)
Date: November 14, 2021 09:26AM

pwb, welcome to e-mule if you're new.

The poem seems to be describing depression. Many of us can probably relate to having these feelings from time to time or in periods of our lives. When it goes on for too long or permeates our existance is when we need to be concerned. Keep writing and sharing.

Mary


Re: "ALONE"
Posted by: les712 (68.116.86.---)
Date: November 14, 2021 01:12PM

Welcome to the Mule. A good read here.

Les




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