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Pretty boys,warm girls
Posted by: Ordinary_girl (82.38.60.---)
Date: November 06, 2021 12:46PM

A short drabble winking smiley


When the pretty boy just stands there,
unobseverant, unware,
her heart beats like fire and ice
her lips pulsing with his so near
yet so far and cold and pale
her skin, her bone ,her lips
twitch beneath her
her heart wanting to get out
to find him, to invite him in
but its obscure,
its complicated and terrifying
and nothing is like it seems.


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Re: Pretty boys,warm girls
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: November 06, 2021 04:50PM

ain't the phenomenology of love grand.

cheers,

Peter


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Re: Pretty boys,warm girls
Posted by: Ordinary_girl (82.38.60.---)
Date: November 07, 2021 06:36PM

thanks peter, and yes, yes it is smiling smiley

beth


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