this is only a very rough draft, written in the spur of a moment, suggestions for improvement and titles will be appreciated


his eyes sparkle intense
curious, an endless sea
I dream and dream
as I'm lost in them
my heartencapsulated forever
your words are simple yet divine
you voice is satin,
luxurious, soft
yet easily torn,
ruined in a moment

my soul my being my all
lives within you
i hang on to everything you say
every move, however slight
i learn to read you,
to find what you think
but your heart is cave
i cannot break into

you love is I desire
it is all I ever dream of
you are the only
the only who keeps me alive
without you would stop
mt soul could not cope
for I am lost in you
though you dontknow
my heart has left myself
and it lives in you
and your heart beats for two

i cannot break free
yet i cannot break in
i am stuck in pergatory
between your heart and mine
i am in a holding pen
that no-one else can see
i lie, because i cannot tell
the truth evades me for always

even if you go
if you vanish ou tof my life
my heart will never fully return
for i was lost
i am lost
i will always be lost
yet you, perfect
with unending beauty
will never know.

And the sunlight clasps the earth,And the moonbeams kiss the sea -What are all these kissings worth,If thou kiss not me?

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 11/05/2022 04:56PM by Ordinary_girl.

Welcome to the mule, OG.

Les

thanks Les wot did you think of the poem?

Beth

"wot did you think of the poem?"\

Not my cup of tea. Keep writing though I'm sure you'll find others who delight in this style.


Les

Use prophylactics dear, love rarely lasts, children and herpes last forever.