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Yesterday
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: October 16, 2021 03:04PM

Yesterday

I show my affection
By touching the back of my hand
To the back of her hand
While she works on her computer.
She shows her recognition
By glancing up from her work
As I leave.


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.243.---)
Date: October 16, 2021 09:12PM

Peter:

An intimate moment captured perfectly. Well done.

Joe


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: October 17, 2021 02:58AM

Thank you, Joe.


Peter


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.226.171.---)
Date: October 17, 2021 11:10PM

romance is everywhere.


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: les712 (68.185.72.---)
Date: October 18, 2021 11:38AM

Pete, it's amazing how creative we humans can be at times. Good job with this one.

Les


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: October 18, 2021 06:29PM

thanks, Les.

Peter


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: redmitten (216.187.184.---)
Date: October 21, 2021 05:06PM

this poem is exactly why i never stay away for too long. good to read this, peter.


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: October 22, 2021 04:14AM

Thanks, red.

I have missed you. Post some of that fine poetry again for a few days so I can download it into one of my files of poetry by my friends before you erase it and publish it someplace.

Cheers,

Peter


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (79.173.229.---)
Date: October 22, 2021 03:46PM

I like this a lot too, Peter! So accepting! So touching.

K.Q.


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Re: Yesterday
Posted by: Steevo (66.82.9.---)
Date: October 23, 2021 10:21AM

Using words to beautifully describe a wordless moment of closeness.
Nice twist Peter.


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