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The End
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: September 27, 2021 05:32PM

The End

Poets and friends
And the way
Begin the day
That ends
With its beginning.

Now withdraw.


Re: The End
Posted by: les712 (68.185.65.---)
Date: September 28, 2021 07:30PM

Short and direct Peter. We measure our days in endings sometimes, though it seems those days which blend into the next seamlessly are often the most memorable.

Les


Re: The End
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.177.---)
Date: September 29, 2021 09:13AM

The Alpha and the Omega. The A and the Z.

Sometimes ends are beginnings and some things have no end....like circles. Until recently, I had ever owned only one bible that was given to me in 1977. It was titled "The Way". With my renewed interest in reading and studying, just last night I read about how in Christ's last moments on the cross, he indicated he was thirsty. A reed or branch was dipped in vinegar wine and raised to his lips. Upon drinking, he said "It is finished" and died. Many see his death and subsequent resurrection as a beginning, however. I find your last line, referencing withdrawl, curious in light of where this poem took me.

Thanks, Peter.

Mary


Re: The End
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.64.---)
Date: September 29, 2021 05:55PM

The last line carries a note of "withdraw[al]" that makes me suspicious. IS all well, Peter?

p.s. I do like the poem though!


Re: The End
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: September 29, 2021 10:32PM

I am always suspicious of any position I adopt. Nothing specifically wrong autobiographicallywise, but thanks for the concern. The poem is about the psychological requirement to step back from intense intimacy even with a group of poet/friends as large as the circle I requested 'send me a poem' from by email, to which I got more than 50 responses, am still getting responses, and to whom I wrote and sent about 30 poems from 21 Sept to Sept 27...fertile after the new moon, after the Autumnal Equinox, about which I got ex post facto from one of my astrologer friends a detail explanation re: how full my sign was during the period.

cheers,

Peter


Re: The End
Posted by: les712 (68.116.80.---)
Date: September 30, 2021 11:28AM

Pete, I will try to get to your poem asap, I hadn't checked the e-mail at AOL for quite a while.

Les




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