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Wondering pondering
Posted by: Gouwerijns (77.169.41.---)
Date: August 24, 2021 02:02AM

Wondering pondering

Inquisitively roaming I shall be
Faiths temptation, it beckons me

Delusional ideas shall rationalize none
Reliant envisions legacy I call my own

Who is it I am to be, I ask, who must I be
Expectation taunts at my seemly weak lines

To skip, to trip, to fall all it’s to be expected
Paths are found and paths are followed within

Certain is the conviction of its incorrectness
I am to be whom is I to be, I am but myself

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.


Re: Wondering pondering
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 25, 2021 02:04AM

I like this one, Carolyn, very introspective,

Peter

I'm going to try formatting this one by adding < pre> before the title and < /pre> after the last line [without the space after < each time]. with the lines set the way I think you had them in the original.



Wondering pondering

Inquisitively roaming I shall be
Faiths temptation, it beckons me

Delusional ideas shall rationalize none
Reliant envisions legacy I call my own

Who is it I am to be, I ask, who must I be
Expectation taunts at my seemly weak lines

To skip, to trip, to fall all it’s to be expected
Paths are found and paths are followed within

Certain is the conviction of its incorrectness
I am to be whom is I to be, I am but myself


Re: Wondering pondering
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 25, 2021 02:04AM

Is that right?


Re: Wondering pondering
Posted by: Gouwerijns (77.169.41.---)
Date: August 25, 2021 03:48AM

thnx Peter.

Yes indeed.

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.




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