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wednesday morning blues
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 12, 2021 06:39PM


wednesday morning blues

them walls take it all
I am here
everyone else - there

so dramatic but
no direct vision is possible
from here

like a bad print
of an old movie

sometimes I feel
like bottom scum

why should I pretend
I’m from California or
Nevada or someplace
where no one can tell
where you are from
by the way you talk?

I am tired
and depressed
and lonely
but I am not
fucked up

go sing your own song
I love you anyway


Re: wednesday morning blues
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 12, 2021 06:42PM

maybe expresses more resentment than I will let myself feel, but I'll let that stand.


Peter


Re: wednesday morning blues
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: August 13, 2021 03:05AM

It's a tough question to answer: How does one cure the blues?

My guess is that everyone feels down from time to time. Perhaps the happiest, least down people are those who focus on other people and things outside themselves. A good read Peter, I enjoyed.


Les


Re: wednesday morning blues
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 13, 2021 03:56AM

Thanks for visiting, Les.

Peter


Re: wednesday morning blues
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 14, 2021 10:52PM

What is to be done about this hacking?


Re: wednesday morning blues
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 20, 2021 02:33PM

I check each day to see if the forum has been cleansed.

Peter


Re: wednesday morning blues
Posted by: les712 (68.185.70.---)
Date: August 24, 2021 10:44AM

It seems to be working again, Peter. Frustrating, though it is I still enjoy reading the posts here.

Les


Re: wednesday morning blues
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 25, 2021 01:58AM

That's how I feel, Les. I wonder how many of our friends we lost this time.

Cheers,

Peter




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