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Poem to ‘Time’
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: July 25, 2021 05:13PM



Poem to ‘Time’

Triangle box is empty
Blank pages silent
So I must speak to morning
Turn your color on

I kept coins in my pocket
Music in the wind
Electricity in the kitchen
Echoes in my dream

We lived the dream
Slept retrieval
Always came back to the beginning
I gave her her own

She knew the magic
Came with some witness
Dancing through mist
Thinking it was fog

I tremble turn and sigh
Hold the hands of the clock
Give memory back
Tie myself to a tree by the river

Tracking flashing pictures
Of sinking heads fading tones
Taking the melody
Of who knew where we were then

Take a chance on the fall
Go out into the night
Follow the candle
Shadows sing out

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 07/25/2009 05:14PM by petersz.


Re: Poem to ‘Time’
Posted by: les712 (68.116.86.---)
Date: July 26, 2021 02:02PM

pete, I like the way you look back in time without becoming nostalgic. A good read.

Les


Re: Poem to ‘Time’
Posted by: les712 (68.116.86.---)
Date: July 26, 2021 02:47PM

I'm just messing
with the html tags.
Checking out how the
line breaks go.
Ignore this post.




Les

Edited 8 time(s). Last edit at 07/26/2009 06:28PM by les712.


Re: Poem to ‘Time’
Posted by: gilstocker (121.96.123.---)
Date: July 27, 2021 04:29AM

Well a wild spirited kid that's all I can say


Re: Poem to ‘Time’
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: July 27, 2021 05:17AM

Thanks for all three responses, and, yes Les, it's ok if you mess with my texts...I might learn something.

amo to all,

Peter




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