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The Opportunity
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: July 16, 2021 01:20AM

The Opportunity

When I learned my roommate
Was leaving at the end of next month
I immediately called my girl friend
To invite her to move in with me.

I listed all the reasons I could think of
For her to say ‘no’: the stairs are too much,
It’s too far from her stomping grounds,
She’d have to put up with me, etc.
...I won’t go into all of the reasons for her to say ‘no’ here.

She agreed to say no.
We both laughed.
We hung up the phone.
Relieved.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 07/16/2009 01:24AM by petersz.


Re: The Opportunity
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: July 16, 2021 11:14AM

A good read, Peter.

Les




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