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Distractibility of my mind
Posted by: Gouwerijns (77.169.41.---)
Date: July 02, 2021 06:59AM

Ability for pure concentration for something
Most times I can’t seem to accomplish this

While reasons escape me, like summer snow
Searching for ways to captivate my creativity

Million words fly thru as a flock of seagulls
Cluttering unsullied expressionistic emotions

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.


Re: Distractibility of my mind
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: July 02, 2021 11:29AM

Million words fly thru as a flock of seagulls
Cluttering unsullied expressionistic emotions


Carolyn:

It seems you've been able to cull the perfect words from the "flock of seagulls" to express your frustrations. Now if I could only do the same....

Joe


Re: Distractibility of my mind
Posted by: Gouwerijns (77.169.41.---)
Date: July 02, 2021 11:41AM

@joe thnx... long time no read ... hows things ?



dont ask how i managed to get it out... guess followed the flow one way or another..

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.


Re: Distractibility of my mind
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: July 02, 2021 04:55PM

Gouwerijns,

Million words fly thru as a flock of seagulls
Cluttering unsullied expressionistic emotions

dem boids is always overhead, gettin drowned in the sky

Peter


Re: Distractibility of my mind
Posted by: Gouwerijns (77.169.41.---)
Date: July 02, 2021 05:03PM

thnx peter... but what you mean with "dem boids is always overhead, getting drowned in the sky"????
Gouwe

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.


Re: Distractibility of my mind
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: July 02, 2021 05:09PM

even confusion has its end




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