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As I Seek
Posted by: easyeverett (97.125.164.---)
Date: June 30, 2021 04:23AM

The burden buried far beneath
is wrapped around a silent sheath;
when loosed the dagger digs so deep
it strikes the dreamless core of sleep.

A spark goes dark devoid of light
as blindness can't regain its sight
and sleep is dreamless sleep denied
with nature's laws man has complied.

I seek no bleak and empty pit
in fact I'm free to flee from it
yet here to fear I must succumb
upon the path of wrath to come

that calls my all to hide inside
the darkest center of my pride
and won't consign or realign
when desolate and dark entwine.

Awareness lost, so sad the cost,
I find the mind is being tossed
about without a doubt to think,
but fair eyes stare and do not blink!!

Depression has me by the throat
while stealing every note I wrote
throughout my head upon this bed;
I'll right the wrongs I write till dead

though sadness saturates my all
(so dark is desolation's fall)
it is enshrined inside my mind
a pit so deep and deeply lined

that will alone will free me not
for as I seek my life was sought
and I fell down this well of hell
but lived to tell this tale I tell.

And now I lay upon this bed
my will so still it must be dead,
I say please pray for me today
to keep that final sleep at bay.


Re: As I Seek
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: June 30, 2021 09:00AM

Tom:

The fact that you can summon the will to write so well while suffering so much is remarkable. I certainly will honor the request in the closing two lines.

Joe


Re: As I Seek
Posted by: les712 (68.116.88.---)
Date: June 30, 2021 11:05AM

A good read Tom, I second the sentiments Joe expressed.


Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/30/2009 11:06AM by les712.


Re: As I Seek
Posted by: easyeverett (97.125.164.---)
Date: July 04, 2021 04:34AM

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Re: As I Seek
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: July 04, 2021 01:17PM

Boom chaka boom cha




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