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First Kiss
Posted by: Iridescent1 (81.174.164.---)
Date: June 16, 2022 10:50AM

And my innards
are a blitzkrieg.
Swooping, swirling,
diving
heart wrench.

Early days still
dominate and
this torrent has
undone me.

I've tried to
intellectualise,
co-ordinate my thoughts.
But cognitive
its not and
I'm not about
to fight.

So, with mint breath held,
then expelled in gentle question
the adventure will
begin.

'Can I kiss you?'
'Yes.'

(Smile
and then
Repeat).

Dan


Re: First Kiss
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: June 16, 2022 01:24PM

Dan,

cute ending

Peter


Re: First Kiss
Posted by: hollyanne2 (24.241.63.---)
Date: June 17, 2022 05:59PM

Nice. Good description of first kisses :-)




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