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Dear Meagan,
Posted by: SiennaRider (218.186.12.---)
Date: June 15, 2022 09:27AM

Why.
Why did you.
Why did you kill.
why did you kill yourself.

what.
what made you.
what made you kill.
what made you kill yourself.

Meagan.
How foolish.
You were only fourteen.
Who caused you all this pain.

Grieving.
Grieving is your family.
Over your death.
Over your suicide.

Pain.
Suffering of that heartache.
Sudden loss of friendship.
Too fast. Too soon.

Meagan.
I wish i could scold you.
I wish i could yell at you.
But you are, gone.

Help.
I need it.
I cannot get over that fact.
I must not remember it.

Emptiness.
That's what my life has now.
Because of you.
Because of your death.

Meagan.
I treasured this friendship.
What made you do this.
a simple religion.

No.
It wasn't simple was it.
Christianity took your life.
You had to rebel.

I told you to hope.
I told you to wait.
I told you to pray.
I told you to never stop wishing.

Meagan.
You didn't.
You were impatient.
You had to go and join God.

I'm glad you're in heaven though.
I'm glad you're a believer.
I'm glad you're no longer sad.
I'm glad you're free.

I'm sad you're gone.
I'm sad for your family.
I'm sad that you did this.
I'm sad the devil won.

Meagan.
Do not be unhappy now.
I'll miss you,certainly i will.
You only had one chance.

Meagan. I'll join you one day.



This is dedicated to my now passed friend, Meagan. She took her life for her family didn't allow her to convert into the Christian I was influencing her to become. I'll miss you Meagan, I don't know how you could have ever done this. It was too sudden for a thirteen year old like me to take in. You were my closest friend and my almost sister yet I never suspected something like that to happen. I'll never get over it but, Meagan, I'm not sorry, though, I made you the faithful believer I always knew you would become.


Re: Dear Meagan,
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: June 15, 2022 02:34PM

Welcome to the mule. Whatever your poetic goals may be, this is likely a good place to further them.

That aside. Assuming you are as young as you've stated, then it is a fair bet you are also, as all youth are cursed, naive. As such, I'm going to give you a few warnings. The internet is not a safe place for you to be wandering around. Don't give out any of your personal information. Name of yourself, friends, family, your age, location, location or names of schools, local landmarks, hang outs, so on so forth. It is very, very easy to find a person if they give even just one piece of information. And, as young as you say you are, you might as well have a target branded onto your skull.

Again, welcome to the mule.


Re: Dear Meagan,
Posted by: SiennaRider (218.186.12.---)
Date: July 04, 2021 05:00AM

Mr. P,

Please take note:

1- Names were changed for privacy though not stated

2- i WAS thirteen if you actually read it carefully

3- I would be so foolish such as to reveal anything on the internet would I?


All my intentions are clear, to showcase poetry and none other.

Thank you,
Sienna


Re: Dear Meagan,
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: July 04, 2021 01:15PM

Calm down, I'm trying to help, remember? But good, good. The net is a dangerously wondrous place, learn the rules and you have yourself an indispensable tool.


Re: Dear Meagan,
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: July 05, 2021 10:58AM

A good read, SR, I enjoyed this one.

Les




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