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On an Old Man Day
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: June 04, 2022 11:12PM

On an Old Man Day
Withdrawn for various reasons. I hate to do that, butI think we can all live without this poem.

love,

Peter

Edited 2 time(s). Last edit at 06/08/2021 09:24PM by petersz.


Re: On an Old Man Day
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: June 05, 2022 01:30AM

"Try so hard, boy
get it just right
little grass hopper
avoiding the dark "

Peter-2005


Re: On an Old Man Day
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: June 05, 2022 01:40AM

Aiy,

btw,

the soda jerk is Elvis.

amo,

Peter


Re: On an Old Man Day
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: June 05, 2022 05:28AM

Good one Peter, hard to know what to think when an icon dies. I reflect back on Elton's "Candle in the Wind". I remember feeling very sad upon hearing of Henry Fonda's death. He seemed to me to be just a likable guy.


Les


Re: On an Old Man Day
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: June 05, 2022 06:53AM

Peter:

Another icon from our more youthful days is gone, and you've captured the emotions of the moment perfectly.

Joe

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/05/2022 06:53AM by hpesoj.


Re: On an Old Man Day
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: June 05, 2022 05:08PM

Thanks yous, Johnny, Les and Joe.

grasshopper




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