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Bear in my fridge
Posted by: dawlypaul (81.105.13.---)
Date: May 31, 2022 02:58PM

There's a bear in my fridge,
I don't know why he's there,
And if he doesn't drink my beer,
I probably won't care,
As long as I can reach the butter,
And get milk for my tea,
No one will know he's in there
Except for him and me..

Paul D 30/5/09


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Re: Bear in my fridge
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 31, 2022 04:33PM

Paul,

excellent...exactly how I feel today, too.

Peter


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Re: Bear in my fridge
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 31, 2022 08:42PM

Paul, I think you might have gone much further with this one, I love the concept though.


Les


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Re: Bear in my fridge
Posted by: dawlypaul (81.105.13.---)
Date: June 01, 2022 05:42AM

Ah Les, thankyou - I may expand on this yet - I think he got put in there the other night after a few beers...


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