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~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 01:16AM

summer weather
has finally broken spring
you come inside after
hours in the yard
sun baked and beautiful
smelling like you smell

I breathe your skin in deeply
and hold you close
and feel the heat you radiate
burning on my body
and inviting me to stay
a little closer for awhile

I’ve never really been a fan of summer
I don’t like too much heat
and have always preferred
the cool winds and the chaos
of the colors of autumn
and the fresh breezes of spring

but something about you, today
in this sun kissed state
glowing from the warmth
and smiling because
summer is your season
makes me appreciate it all a little more

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 05/30/2009 01:16AM by frost42_24.


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: Steevo (66.82.9.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 12:27PM

frost I wish there were more romanticism like this in the world. I have said before I don't judge poems good or bad. They either do something for me or they don't. This does good things for me.

Thanks for an uplifting read.


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: aaron (71.193.157.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 02:11PM

This does good things for me as well. Thanks


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 03:02PM

Aaron and Steevo, I enjoy the romanticism in life. It's really everywhere if people open their eyes and see it...yes? thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. I'm glad good things came to both of you.


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 03:08PM

Sherry,

I have always been confused. To me what people call romanticism has always been seeing the world as it is. Your acceptance of your amour's season is exactly how you demonstrate that you are you and capable of growing because of love. That makes it realism.

Thanks for the reminder,

Peter


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 03:14PM

Peter, I couldn't agree more...as in, it's everywhere all the time. But thank you for pointing out the realism too. I think there's a good balance between the two that can be found.

I've just always felt such a sense of wonder for life and seen the beauty in places other people wouldn't necessarily notice. I like it that way.


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 03:56PM

A good read Frosty.

Les


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: May 30, 2022 07:04PM

thanks, Les.


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: UPMarty (71.87.67.---)
Date: May 31, 2022 02:54AM

....and smiling because
summer is your season
makes me appreciate it all a little more


to be loved
by someone
enough

that they smile
when it's our season

is love
enough

Enjoyed, Sherry.

Mary


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Re: ~learning to love the season we are in~
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: May 31, 2022 02:55AM

thanks, Mary. I'm glad you enjoyed it.


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