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Deep view
Posted by: Iridescent1 (81.174.164.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 10:02AM

Myriad million voices
dying to be heard.
An orchestral silence;
Their last words.
Life's largest chorus hall,
the scale is absurd.
Echoes of their monologues
all that we observe.

Through the sparkling rafters
Our wonderings reverb,
We're awaiting a communique,
from a distant herd.
By the time that we'd arrived,
They'd spoke every word.
And the deep view carries on.
And their silence isn't heard.

Dan


Re: Deep view
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 11:51AM

A good read Dan, I really enjoyed the poem.

Les


Re: Deep view
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 29, 2022 02:05PM

There always the sense we've missed something, the thing, that is really important, in the background, just before we arrived...


Nice work, again, Dan.

Peter




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