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Doubts
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 15, 2022 03:45PM

Doubts

I just don’t understand those people on the treadmills
It makes me dizzy to stand still
When the world is moving so fast.

I could continue forever
writing fragments and fragments
of poems
without ever getting it together.


Re: Doubts
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: May 16, 2022 07:18AM

Interesting contrast, Peter. Your ability to see things others do not is well-honed.

Joe


Re: Doubts
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 16, 2022 11:29AM

Peter, I must have ten thousand poem titles, the creative kernels of poems I've never written, in the unused portions of my mind's attic. The curse of being a poet I suppose, thanks for reminding me of that fact.

Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 05/17/2009 12:39AM by les712.


Re: Doubts
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 16, 2022 10:57PM

"We are not alone."




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