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Roses in the City
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 15, 2022 03:42PM

Roses in the City

my sister Dorothy
had the best rose garden
in the city
three years in a row

That is where I learned
roses have no smell

I watch
North Beach
from the cafe window

the old mathematician
playing Soduku

the barista tending
his new baby

the face of the friendly
cop

tourists tourists tourists

and my face in the window pane
“wake up and smell the coffee”


Re: Roses in the City
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 16, 2022 04:22AM

A great portrait of the city, Peter.

Les


Re: Roses in the City
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 16, 2022 04:59AM

Thanks, Les.

Peter




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