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Posted by: easyeverett (97.125.165.---)
Date: May 05, 2022 03:41PM

quiet New York City night.

Edited 5 time(s). Last edit at 05/08/2021 11:19AM by easyeverett.


Re: A Walk Back In Time
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 06, 2022 02:22PM

Tom this is much more powerful than much of your recent rhymed work. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.

Les


Re: A Walk Back In Time
Posted by: easyeverett (97.125.165.---)
Date: May 06, 2022 02:37PM

Hi Les. I kind of liked this one and when free/form clicks it
can be powerful but it is much harder for me to write good free
form poetry than structured and rhymed poetry so, being rather
slothful in my recreation, I tend toward the "easy." LOL. Thank
you for the read Les. I appreciate it very much. tom


Re: A Walk Back In Time
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 08, 2022 03:37AM

Tom, Here's my response to Terry on my thread. It pertains to how much space you take on the board.

amo,

Peter

Merc,

re: Tom pushing people off. I figure he's old enough to be able to know that he is doing that and that it is not fair to all those who only post once in a while. I guess, Terry, that your mentioning to me is sufficient to motivate me to say something to him. As an anarchist, I'm sure you know how much I hate being anyone else's cop or daddy or conscience, but I will take on the task.

Thanks for stopping by to read the poem.

amo,

Peter




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