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Fading
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 01, 2022 05:41PM

Fading

The past is a long time ago
and it is going further.
The friends I held close
are barely warm in my mind.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 05/01/2022 05:42PM by petersz.


Re: Fading
Posted by: UPMarty (71.87.67.---)
Date: May 01, 2022 11:37PM

Hopefully moreso still
in the heart.
Even as the mind
with the past
goes further.

Mary


Re: Fading
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: May 02, 2022 07:48AM

An unfortunate fact of life, Peter. You've managed to say a lot in so few words. Nice.

Joe

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 05/02/2022 07:49AM by hpesoj.


Re: Fading
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 02, 2022 09:49AM

Thanks for the responses, Mary and Joseph.

Peter


Re: Fading
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 02, 2022 10:38AM

It is true that we often grow apart from our companions Good little ditty here, Peter.

Les


Re: Fading
Posted by: IanAKB (203.217.79.---)
Date: May 02, 2022 06:53PM

A profound pensee, Peter.

A pill to refresh memories would be enticing, though one would have to be able to cope with the bad as well as the good.

Ian


Re: Fading
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 03, 2022 03:39AM

Amen to that, Ian.

Thank, les and Ian. I didn't think it became a poem until I moved the word 'Fading' from its last line to being its title.

Peter




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