This is lyrical... reads a little funny when not set to music. I think it should be longer, but ... enjoy.

she smiles just for him
her dimples shine for him
every line across the face of love

freckles align for him
sparkling eyes for him
features draw a path to love

she dreams a dream of him
and cries a cry for him
where is this picture perfect love?


Belle

Don't know why no one commented on this, Belle. It must have got lost in the crowd at the time. I would agree with you that as a poem, it's a bit skimpy, but as a song lyric, with some catchy romantic music, and a few reprises, it could seem just right.

Ian

Thanks Ian! I appreciate it...

Belle