This is lyrical... reads a little funny when not set to music. I think it should be longer, but ... enjoy.
she smiles just for him
her dimples shine for him
every line across the face of love
freckles align for him
sparkling eyes for him
features draw a path to love
she dreams a dream of him
and cries a cry for him
where is this picture perfect love?
Belle
Don't know why no one commented on this, Belle. It must have got lost in the crowd at the time. I would agree with you that as a poem, it's a bit skimpy, but as a song lyric, with some catchy romantic music, and a few reprises, it could seem just right.
Ian
Thanks Ian! I appreciate it...
Belle