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A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.101.---)
Date: March 27, 2022 03:46PM

The real is so mundane;
The ideal superfluous
What is new in this?

Hear the hiss of hymn,
Tearfully pretty;
What is love? bliss?

Seal the spirit of happiness;
Righteousness is trite;
Words that haunt can simply miss,

Fall on grounds of seedless sight;
Blundered blinks are bewildering,
Woven quilts are seamless.

And mothers' day is what,
Without mother?
A day less to wish?

K.Q.


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 28, 2022 12:37AM

Khalida,

seamless
un-betrayed
ready to speak
the word
no one can speak

Peter


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 05, 2022 01:20AM

bump


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 05, 2022 03:29PM

A day less to wish?

Great line, Khalida, happy Mother's day to you.


Les


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 11, 2022 01:37PM

forward


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: August 30, 2021 04:49PM

K.Q.,

It's been too long since we had the joy of reading your poetry here. I hope your world-life will allow your creative-life room to breath and share.

amo,

Peter

p.s.

This is the most recent poem you've posted: March 27, 2022 11:46AM


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.80.---)
Date: August 31, 2021 05:41PM

Dear Peter,
Thanks for always being there and pulling me back. I have written more recent ones, but have not posted on emule. Perhaps I will in the future?!?!

Hope all is well with emulers! I do miss you and do silently pop in every once in a while to read you. Be well!


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: UPMarty (71.87.73.---)
Date: September 01, 2021 12:26AM

Hi K.Q. Hope all is well with you. Please do post your recent poems.

Mary


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.243.---)
Date: September 01, 2021 09:10PM

I echo Mary's sentiments.

Joe


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: les712 (68.185.72.---)
Date: September 01, 2021 11:15PM

Nice to see you posting, Khalida.

Les


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Re: A Facial Expression begging the opposite
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.14.---)
Date: September 04, 2021 05:28PM

Mary, Joe, and Les,
Thanks for your post. I hope to be a little bit more active soon. It has been a long summer and an eventful one too. Miss you all a lot!


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