Squint then eyes wide,
like "off and on".
The other side: the tides
on a pre-sunset afternoon.
Doubling, later, the darkness
at 6:30 ; eyes on shades...
of memories...
This summer will be made.
Why do I enjoy this so much, AngelsFear? I know it is not because I entirely grasp the scene, though it's not entirely alien. I do like your staccato delivery.
amo,
Peter
Thanks Peter. It just occurred to me while I was on a bus trip last week . Hey, I thought I'd post it here. It was around 5 pm, The sun was about to set and I kept on squinting everytime the Sun's rays hit my eye So I looked on the other side. It was a cool view. Thanks for enjoying it.
By the way, summer is here in my place.
Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 03/26/2009 05:01AM by AngelsFear.
Very hopeful poem, AF, nice read.
Les