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beyond the silence
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 24, 2022 02:05PM

beyond the silence

but for me
this morning
the music
is too frenetic
frantic and out of pace
with my needs

the slow breathing
hidden in morning
trace shadows along the buildings
hidden in aether
forgotten by the stars
one entrance
and the door closes
slowly


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Re: beyond the silence
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: March 24, 2022 04:50PM

this is beautiful.


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Re: beyond the silence
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (86.108.45.---)
Date: March 24, 2022 04:53PM

I second that, Beautiful!

K.Q.


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Re: beyond the silence
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 24, 2022 08:44PM

Thank you both, Sherry and Khalida, on a fragile day.

salam,

Peter


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