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I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: March 22, 2022 01:09AM

spring breaks, finally
the raindrops tap
my tin roof
late in the evening
and rinse the
ugly winter remnants
down the gutters
making music along the way

I feel like I should be dancing

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/22/2009 01:10AM by frost42_24.


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 22, 2022 02:30AM

I know the feeling.

Peter


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: March 22, 2022 06:37PM

Peter, we probably should be dancing...


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 22, 2022 09:32PM

You bet.


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.8.---)
Date: March 24, 2022 10:16AM

Refreshing , Frost. I wish I could reach a point where "I feel I should be dancing"! Enjoyable read.

K.Q.


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: March 24, 2022 04:49PM

thanks, KQ. You'll get there. It's a state of mind and a choice you can decide to make...

then all there is to do is open you ear's to life's music and shake your stuff!


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 04, 2022 11:49PM

bump


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: frost42_24 (166.189.225.---)
Date: May 05, 2022 07:52PM

I tried to ask you if "the bump' is your dance of choice...


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 05, 2022 11:33PM

I remember that stuff. Very sexy. They banned it in some of the small towns in Ne England.

bump.

Peter


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: easyeverett (97.125.165.---)
Date: May 06, 2022 12:44AM

Great inspiration Frost. How about bump and "grind." Nah, just bump,
I'm too old to grind. tom


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: frost42_24 (66.68.162.---)
Date: May 06, 2022 01:10AM

Peter, I suppose bumping butts is provacative...but the old bump and grind, Easy, well that's just a recipe for trouble!


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: May 06, 2022 06:27AM

I missed this first time around, Frosty. Glad I saw it this time.

Joe


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: frost42_24 (66.68.162.---)
Date: May 06, 2022 11:53AM

thanks, Joe. I'm glad that you're glad...heh


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 11, 2022 01:36PM

forward


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: aaron (69.30.71.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 04:21PM

Awesome poem the first time I read it, and even better today.

Thanks


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Re: I feel like I should be dancing
Posted by: frost42_24 (32.147.209.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 05:18PM

thanks for reading it twice!


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