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THE ESSENCE
Posted by: Bohemian Poet (92.3.62.---)
Date: March 21, 2022 07:50PM

The Universe
Expands
Pulling at my hands
Crazy thoughts notions
Filling my mind
Isn’t everybody blind or caught within their moment of mundane

The holy name
Enchants
Several different slants
Blind simple acceptance
Fills the soul
Isn’t everybody whole and nurtured for natures purpose in the end

The archetypal friend
Resends
Stitching up loose ends
I like to hear
Isn’t everybody’s fear of being alone, unloved and unwanted, the essence of being alive


Re: THE ESSENCE
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.16.---)
Date: March 22, 2022 03:39PM

Isn’t everybody blind or caught within their moment of mundane

Perhaps!

Isn’t everybody whole and nurtured for natures purpose in the end

Not Necessarily!

Isn’t everybody’s fear of being alone, unloved and unwanted, the essence of being alive

I don't believe so!

Anice and thought provoking read! Welcome to emule.


Re: THE ESSENCE
Posted by: Bohemian Poet (92.0.237.---)
Date: March 22, 2022 10:12PM

Thank you for the warm welcome and thought provoking comments


Re: THE ESSENCE
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: April 26, 2022 05:46PM

B.,

I like the rhythms of this a lot.

Peter


Re: THE ESSENCE
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: April 27, 2022 01:17AM

Isn’t everybody’s fear of being alone, unloved and unwanted, the essence of being alive

As unbelievable as it may seem to most of us, some people go through life without ever experiencing these feelings.


Les


Re: THE ESSENCE
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: April 27, 2022 07:29PM

Welcome to the mule.


Re: THE ESSENCE
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 11, 2022 10:12PM

bump




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