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solace
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: March 20, 2022 07:05PM

beautiful you,
so familiar to my heart
that it skips when you're gone
and dances to the beats
quickened when you are near
until I'm breathless
and still

you are countless repetitions
of a million moves
I have yet to discover
and you don't even realize
the inspiration you deliver
with every whisper of your words

count for me
the days so long awaiting
every moment,impatienly in line-
each wanting their chance
to bathe in the glow
of your spotlight

I will stand in that line for as long as it takes to get my turn...


Re: solace
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 20, 2022 08:40PM

Thanks for giving us your poem, Sherry.

I especially like the message and straightforwardness of:

and you don't even realize
the inspiration you deliver
with every whisper of your words

amo,

Peter


Re: solace
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: March 20, 2022 09:08PM

thanks, Peter. I know it's sub par, but I needed to try to clean out some of the cobwebs from the corners of my writer's block. I appreciate the read and the comments. Glad you could find something decent in there.


Re: solace
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: March 21, 2022 07:40AM

I needed to try to clean out some of the cobwebs from the corners of my writer's block.

That's the spirit! And not a bad effort, either. Good to see you here again.

Joe


Re: solace
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: March 21, 2022 01:17PM

thanks, Joe. Nice to be here. I'll grease the wheels and come up with something better next time.


Re: solace
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 04, 2022 11:49PM

bump




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