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Posted by: easyeverett (75.170.166.---)
Date: March 18, 2022 09:40PM

from Blue-Boy-Blue and you!"

Edited 5 time(s). Last edit at 05/08/2021 11:09AM by easyeverett.


Re: Blue-Boy-Blue And You *dirty poem* sorry
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: April 02, 2022 04:10AM

Tom,

I'd hoped for something a bit more erotic, but found this somehow awkward and overly formal in its diction. I guess erotic poetry is hard to write, since I don't even attempt to write it myself.

cheers,

Peter


Re: Blue-Boy-Blue And You *dirty poem* sorry
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 08, 2022 03:50AM

Tom, Here's my response to Terry on my thread. It pertains to how much space you take on the board.

amo,

Peter

Merc,

re: Tom pushing people off. I figure he's old enough to be able to know that he is doing that and that it is not fair to all those who only post once in a while. I guess, Terry, that your mentioning to me is sufficient to motivate me to say something to him. As an anarchist, I'm sure you know how much I hate being anyone else's cop or daddy or conscience, but I will take on the task.

Thanks for stopping by to read the poem.

amo,

Peter




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