** had to take it back

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/18/2009 11:41AM by redmitten.

I know you well

enough to feel you face the wind
while others seek shelter inside the boat’s cabin.
I think of you, opening your coat to capture more
of that brisk air. If I were there
would you wrap me in? I can’t know for sure


I love the irony of it, and the internal music. A bit bitter, but touching.

K.Q.

hi k q,

well i wasn't going for bitter, but rather "acceptance". lately i've been exploring the differences we each have in regard to acceptance. some find defeat in it, i am finding liberation. funny how a person can become fixated on some topic for a while. (that's me..!)

good to "see you here"!

Thanks, red! I am glad to be back so far. If I remember correctly, what I found ironic was the issue of knowledge, and it striked me how one can know so much outwardly, and yet so little inwardly. and that is the thread of thought that led me to bitterness. Maybe I was projecting my own feelings. I am glad you find liberation in acceptance. I am trying to get there too, but it is not a smooth road!

Red,

Now I regret I could not get to read this carefully and comment...since you have withdrawn it from public view.

Peter

wouldn't leave it for me to read huh?

Why did you feel you had to take it back Mitts? That doesn't seem like you at all.

Brucefur