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facial expression in refrain
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (212.35.66.---)
Date: March 16, 2022 02:32AM

I curl my tongue back
into its cave
cuff curiosity
interrupt the wave
of voiceless motion

don't invite me
into your ocean

K.Q.


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Re: facial expression in refrain
Posted by: redmitten (71.221.13.---)
Date: March 16, 2022 10:58PM

oh my, kq!

i always admire something brief- this is wonderful! and timely, as i've an ocean invitation i recently turned down myself..


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Re: facial expression in refrain
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 17, 2022 02:14AM

oh my.

oop, red already said that.

salome,

Peter


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Re: facial expression in refrain
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: March 17, 2022 04:44PM

Khalida:

You say so much with a few well-chosen words. Excellent.

Joe


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Re: facial expression in refrain
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 04, 2022 11:48PM

bump


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Re: facial expression in refrain
Posted by: UPMarty (71.87.67.---)
Date: May 05, 2022 12:07AM

yes, wow, you have packed a punch with this one, Khalida. Hope you are doing ok.

Mary


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