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Daedal
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 13, 2022 06:13PM

Daedal

1. Dictionary: dae•dal (dēd'l) pronunciation
1. Ingenious and complex in design or function; intricate.
2. Finely or skillfully made or employed; artistic.
[Latin daedalus, from Greek daidalos.]

Thesaurus: daedal
adjective
Difficult to understand because of intricacy: byzantine, complex, complicated, convoluted, Daedalian, elaborate, intricate, involute, involved, knotty, labyrinthine, tangled. See simple/complex.

2. her and not her: me and not me...
into the book and away from the text...
detention and dissolution in the moment
taking hold of reading and re-conceiving concepts
breaking through the words and their wordiness
to the consciousness shared since consciousness evolved
amidst the loss and the twistings these thousands
on thousands of years and instances
up on the mountain and into the city
pushing each other aside into isolation.

2. Yet form always makes itself present,
even when indeterminate,
that is,
without a definite name.

3. So I sit and read
a book I got
when we went out together
about poetry
which I can rarely share with you
since your own world is too complex
that you can make poetry
but can seldom tolerate other people’s
though that never means never.

words and people pushing each other aside
growing their own distances
across a stream only strong swimmers cross
or those in danger of drowning.


Re: Daedal
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: March 13, 2022 08:00PM

Holy Icarus, asphyxia, and gunplay !


Re: Daedal
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 13, 2022 09:37PM

Danke




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