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At the Sandwich Bar, after the Exhibition
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 13, 2022 12:55AM

At the Sandwich Bar, after the Exhibition

The artist always leaves with the ladder;
The poet goes to listen to the band alone.
We made our own way through
what became yesterday.
I can’t tell you the way to get home –
can’t make a sign you can follow.

We turn off the flash,
taking pictures in the dark,
make a sound the drummer can hear,
make an image out of words.

What I’m drinking tastes like beer,
but what they’re playing still fills the poem.
The poet sleeps inside the poem,
hoping for the first step.


Re: At the Sandwich Bar, after the Exhibition
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 13, 2022 01:01AM

I find myself posting different kinds of poem each time tonight.,,trying something different with each poem. I want to see what I can do in each poem.


Re: At the Sandwich Bar, after the Exhibition
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (212.35.66.---)
Date: March 17, 2022 09:24AM

The poet sleeps inside the poem,
hoping for the first step.

I like this!


Re: At the Sandwich Bar, after the Exhibition
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 17, 2022 11:47PM

Thanks, Khalida. I write that kind of thing because I am a reader of Wallace Stevens.

Peter


Re: At the Sandwich Bar, after the Exhibition
Posted by: redmitten (216.187.184.---)
Date: March 18, 2022 11:57AM

i especially enjoyed the title and the first line.

thoroughly,


Re: At the Sandwich Bar, after the Exhibition
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 18, 2022 08:54PM

Me too, Red. In the background of that first line is my memory of my former spouse breaking down her art exhibits...the sight of her carrying the ladder out last.

Thanks for stopping by,

Peter




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