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happy pain
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 11, 2022 10:17PM

happy pain

we walked
all afternoon and evening
my feet hurt


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Re: happy pain
Posted by: mg (205.188.116.---)
Date: March 12, 2022 03:46AM

sweet. thanks Peter, made my heart smile on a sad night. g'night.


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Re: happy pain
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 12, 2022 04:50AM

Im glad to give you a smile, mg.

Peter


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Re: happy pain
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (212.35.66.---)
Date: March 16, 2022 04:46AM

This reminds me of giving birth, a pain I dearly enjoyed!

K.Q.


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Re: happy pain
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 16, 2022 07:48PM

Thanks for making that connection, Khalida. It was my wife, Brenda's , feeling too with her two birthings. Though that sensation had to be more intense than what my little poem was about.

Peter


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