Down, down the grey wall
To look upon the graves beyond windows
I have seen the shadow
Cast across the meadow
All of this fades then reappears

dustrazor,

good image.

you might embed it in a longer piece or make it part of a short lyric or leave it as is and go on to something else, but I still like the scene you draw here.

Peter

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/12/2021 08:25PM by petersz.

you know, i've thought about embedding this or adding on to it but i rather like the brevity of it and the way it leaves you not fully understanding exactly what is going on. it's almost sinister methinks. glad you like. d