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At Sunset
Posted by: mg (64.12.116.---)
Date: March 07, 2022 05:02AM

Knowing what would be, I did it still
I stepped forth thoughtfully and planned methodically
The fall was clearer than the rise
I understood the pangs and from without wondered,
"This is not what I thought it would be like"
It was too late

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/07/2021 05:08AM by mg.


Re: At Sunset
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 01:37AM

mg,

I like this little meditation.

Peter


Re: At Sunset
Posted by: mg (64.12.116.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 04:53AM

thanks Peter




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