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tune
Posted by: obiwan (72.141.185.---)
Date: March 03, 2022 09:07PM

every love has a tune
first a sharp crescendo
rolling, rising to pastoral melody
of flute, harp, and violin
in unison they sing
in climatic glory
inevitably staccatoing


Re: tune
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 03, 2022 11:11PM

nice


Re: tune
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: March 04, 2022 06:10AM

Yes, it is.


Re: tune
Posted by: mg (64.12.116.---)
Date: March 05, 2022 06:44PM

smiling smiley I enjoyed this.


Re: tune
Posted by: obiwan (72.141.185.---)
Date: March 05, 2022 07:03PM

many thanks smiling smiley


Re: tune
Posted by: les712 (68.116.92.---)
Date: February 15, 2022 05:12AM

very seasonal


Re: tune
Posted by: les712 (68.185.70.---)
Date: May 07, 2022 10:55AM

I often wonder what happens to the one time posters who seemingly just float in and float out of this forum. Many of them, including this one were pretty good poets.

Les


Re: tune
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 13, 2021 11:27PM

I also wonder about the one timers.




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