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kitchen floor
Posted by: Gouwerijns (86.92.240.---)
Date: February 12, 2022 06:57AM

Kitchen floor
Muddy foot prints
Mother mopped away



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my first attemt to write an senryu.

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.


Re: kitchen floor
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: February 12, 2022 08:30PM

mother's lament

here we are again
sparkling for the moment
until in they run in


Re: kitchen floor
Posted by: Merc (75.209.188.---)
Date: February 13, 2022 08:31PM

When I was about four, I pranced across mom's freshly mopped kitchen floor, me covered in mud, holding for her a flower.


Re: kitchen floor
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: February 22, 2022 06:39PM

bump


Re: kitchen floor
Posted by: Gouwerijns (86.92.240.---)
Date: February 23, 2022 09:08AM

@ merc :::what a sweet thing to do... but how did your mom reacted?

@petersz cute lament .. the bump? you fell down after running over the moped floor?

Gouwerijn

My moto's Those who ask question shall know answers.:>>> wie vraagt wie weet. Those who darenot ask shall never know. ::>>> wie niet vraagt wie niet weet.




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