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My Name
Posted by: g47 (209.166.105.---)
Date: February 11, 2022 01:10AM

Hopefully she'll be able to see it
Laughter, she cries
She doesn't get it, its hard to explain
The lost dilemma that is my name

Slumber, eat and study well
The cornerstones of sanity
Vulcan stands guard, his spear missing
He protects all with an ice cream cone
Not threatening it seems

I may begin to ramble, my words will start to fade
My mind is somewhere else uninvited is my brain
Nothing seems to make sense anymore
All that jumping back and forth
The world simplified is thirty-six plus two plus four


Re: My Name
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: February 11, 2022 01:37AM

Thoroughly obscure. I like it.

Peter


Re: My Name
Posted by: g47 (209.166.105.---)
Date: February 12, 2022 03:09AM

Thanks Peter
I appreciate it


Re: My Name
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (79.173.228.---)
Date: February 12, 2022 02:01PM

I agree with Peter, Lana. It is obscure although I can glimpse through some of it with a shade of light. I like your closing line, admire your creative mathematical logic!!

Be well.

K.Q.


Re: My Name
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: February 12, 2022 10:13PM

42 !

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Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/12/2021 10:18PM by JohnnyBoy.


Re: My Name
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: February 22, 2022 06:38PM

bump




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