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A Po-em Old (a villanelle)
Posted by: easyeverett (75.170.198.---)
Date: February 09, 2022 05:06AM

A poem old has verses wrapped in gold
As rhythmic beauty pours from every line;
A magic gift with music to behold.

Sophisticated language ripe and bold
Applied with master crafted strokes sublime;
A poem old has verses wrapped in gold.

A reservoir of riches there we mold
Inside a tapestry spread over time;
A magic gift with music to behold.

As summer heat turns into winter cold,
These songbird troubadours sing out their rhyme;
A poem old has verses wrapped in gold.

Perfection flows from words these poets told
In metronomic splendor like a chime;
A magic gift with music to behold.

The modern poet cannot lift their load
While writing pablum far removed from prime;
A poem old has verses wrapped in gold,
A magic gift with music to behold.


Re: A Po-em Old (a villanelle)
Posted by: les712 (68.116.86.---)
Date: February 19, 2022 02:22PM

Very nicely done, Tom. A good read throughout.

Les


Re: A Po-em Old (a villanelle)
Posted by: UPMarty (71.86.178.---)
Date: February 20, 2022 06:29PM

These songbird troubadours sing out their rhyme;


They sure did....and you offer a nice tribute with this villanelle. Good read, Tom.

Mary




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