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Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: g47 (209.166.105.---)
Date: January 27, 2022 04:24PM

Conflicting schedules never allowed us to meet
Although we yearned for each other ‘neath patched blankets with the moon peering in
Each encounter, short, sweet left me longing for you
Your intoxicating lucid dreams, your nostalgic visions of the past
My eyes have grown weary, tiresome and teary
Your touch has faded off my lids
I seek the embrace of someone else
But no one unhinges me much like you do
Hey Mr. Sandman
Bring me a dream
To tame my broken spirit
Please Mr. Sandman
Bring me a dream
Now is my time to sleep


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Re: Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: January 28, 2022 01:18AM

G47,

Nice feel to this...with some good turns of phrase.

Thanks,

Peter


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Re: Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: g47 (209.166.105.---)
Date: January 28, 2022 02:29PM

thanks for reading and commenting Peter smiling smiley


Lana


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Re: Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: lifeisbutadream (94.249.2.---)
Date: January 29, 2022 12:41AM

Interesting Lana, quite interesting!

K.Q.


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Re: Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: g47 (67.110.40.---)
Date: January 29, 2022 02:56AM

lifeisbutadream Wrote:
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Interesting Lana, quite interesting!


How so Khalida?


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Re: Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: Merc (75.208.42.---)
Date: January 29, 2022 01:14PM

I reaq it, kept me awake.


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Re: Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.193.---)
Date: January 29, 2022 09:26PM

the first 8 lines were my favorite....


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Re: Chronicles of an Insomniac
Posted by: g47 (63.87.112.---)
Date: January 30, 2022 03:11PM

Sorry Merc smiling smiley thanks for reading though

Thanks frost42_24 for reading and commenting...

your feedback is much appreciated


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